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Discussion
texts
BSE : 3.6/4.6/6/3.6
Subject:
English Literature XII
SEMESTER
SIX
Time allocation
10 X 45 minutes
Basic Competence
3.6. membedakan fungsi sosial, struktur teks,dan unsur kebahasaanbeberapa teks pembahasan i lmiah (discussion)l isan dan tulis dengan memberi dan memintainformasi terkait pembahasan isu kontrovesialdan aktual dari beberapa (minimal dua) sudutpandang, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya 4.6. teks pembahasan i lmiah (discussion) 4.6.1. menangkap makna secara kontekstualterkait fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsurkebahasaan teks pembahasan i lmiah (discussion)l isan dan tulis, terkait isu kontroversial danaktual 4.6.2. menyusun pembahasan i lmiah (discussion)l isan dan tulis, terkait isu kontroversial danaktual, dengan memperhatikan fungsi sosial,struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan, secarabenar dan sesuai konteks
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Which statement can raise two opposite opinions?
1. Foreign culture gives bad inf luence.
2. The government should encourage teachers to
increase their competence.
3. I t ’s quite important for teacher to teach contextually.
4. The easiness of information technology causes
teenagers to be lazy.
5. Due to the abundant information in the internet,
teachers are not needed anymore.
Learning purpose
In this chapter, you will learn about
Discussion texts. Surely, you will have to
know the proper grammatical structure
used to write meaningful sentences.
Practicing writ ing a Discussion text is
needed to enhance your understanding on
its social function and text structure.
Before learning
You will use one of the answers for theissue of your essay later.
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Read the text carefully, and do some instructions below!
Corona virus has been threatening the world since i t occurred in
December 2019. The number of the infected people is more and more
increasing, and reaches around 73.92 mill ion people. Scientists
throughout the world are collaborating in researching the vaccines in a
quite great rush. They have been working for about eight months. Some
vaccines have been through with some phases and already been
approved to be used. I t seems that people ’s hope comes true. They have
been t ired of not only being threatened by the virus but also getting their
economy fal l down into the lowest level . Despite the great hope of the
invention of the vaccines, some people sti l l doubt about i ts effectiveness
for some reasons and therefore think that being vaccinated is not the only
way to f ight the corona virus.
These people argue that the process of making vaccine is too
short when compared to other vaccines which took 10 to 20 years of
researching to be safe enough to use. To be used safely, Vaccines have to
pass some steps to develop – pre -clinical tr ials, three phases of clinical
tr ials. Surely i t needs a long t ime as each phase takes some months to get
the accurate result . Forced by the need of stopping the viral contagion,
some countries even accelerated the speed of the vaccines development
by skipping the preclinical tr ial that is quite important to guarantee the
safety when applied to human. Some experts say that assessing the
vaccines cannot be done in rush. They need accurate data and proper
steps. The ineffective or unsafe vaccine will be useless and i t is possible
to be harmful. Byram Bridle, University of Guelph, Canada says, “How long
would i t take to determine i f a vaccine can confer immunological memory
for one year? Of ourse, i t would take at least one year.” The vaccine
developers are asked to ensure that there won ’t be ADE (Antibody -
Development Enhancement) – immune reaction where vaccination makessubsequent exposure to the virus more dangerous. The second reason isthat the potential side effect for the long term cannot be measured yet.
Some vaccine platforms – WHO used to take one platform to be the
international standard - can bring about the r isks. The body mechanism
and metabolism can be troubled by those some different platforms. What
is faced is the same virus, but the effect can be different. Furthermore, we
lack of the knowledge on coronaviruses.
Whilst learning
Activity One
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We need to answer these questions: Can our antibodies protect us
well? Can the immunity last for a long t ime? or Is there a problem due to
the post long covid19 for the people who had had covid19?
Unfortunately, we cannot answer those questions for sure. "The r isk of
the speedy development," says Bridle, " is that poor -quality vaccines
could potential ly turn people into asymptomatic carriers that spread the
virus." The other reason is that the eff icacy of some vaccines which are
not developed properly are sti l l doubted, especially when i t deals with
genetic matter that inf luences individual immunity. Obesity, for
example, can cause other diseases such as diabetes or hypertension
that lower the immunity. This can reduce the effectiveness of the
vaccine. The effectiveness of vaccines can be seen by how vaccination
triggers the antibody -making and how good is the response from the T -
cells after the vaccination.
On contrary, some people believe that vaccination is the most
proper way to f ight the coronavirus which has kil led a lot of people and
is sti l l spreading faster and faster. The f i rst reason is that scientists have
found the new technology of mRNA vaccine (messenger RNA) which
doesn ’t need a long process to make i t . This type of vaccine teaches our
body how to make spike protein that will tr igger the immune system to
produce antibodies. Viral protein is not easy to manufacture during the
biochemistry protein synthesis, but mRNA is able to represent the
complicated information or system in a simple way. In fact, the process
of manufacturing the protein is molecularly the same from a
manufacturing standpoint. In addition, this vaccine can be developed in
any laboratory having the available materials. Therefore, when there is
information on coronavirus, the researchers begin to design the mRNA
instructions for the cells to build the unique spike protein into a mRNA
vaccine. Surely, the process of making vaccines can be standardized
and importantly doesn ’t take a long t ime. People should know that
despite the short t ime of making the vaccines, researchers included a
lot of people in the study to validate the safety and eff icacy, such as
70,000 people injected during the phase of clinical tr ials, and found
them safe. This is such a huge safety data to ensure that the vaccines
are safe. To answer the people ’s doubt about the long effect of the
vaccine, mRNA Vaccine is transient, temporary. This is RNA, i t ’s only
message and does i ts work only in cytoplasm, so i t doesn ’t inf luence our
body or becomes part of the body. The last reason is that this vaccine
has great eff icacy. The covid19 mRNA vaccines give instructions to the
cells to make spike protein, then the cells display the protein to be
recognized by the immune system. When the system says that the
protein doesn ’t belong there, the antibodies are made. At last , the
immune memory remembers i t and our body learns how to protect i tself
against the future infection.
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The most important target of making vaccines is to make the antibodies
able to be against the protein on the surface of the virus. Those antibodies
covering the protein of the virus stop the virus from doing anything.
Researches realize that antibodies are sometimes not able to cover all
viruses, so our body needs the response of T cells. I f the T cells can
recognize the spike protein, then i t will be pretty easier to kick on the
viruses. According to Professor Shane Crotty, PhD ’s research, the immune
memory in people having had the covid19 can remember the virus pretty
well . Similarly, after vaccination, not only are the antibodies formed well ,
but the response of the T cells is high also. The advantage of this vaccine is
that everyone vaccinated won ’t get a r isk of getting sick with coronavirus.
In conclusion, vaccines are badly needed to make the herd
immunity. I t is hoped that when 70% of the population in the world get the
immunity, the spread for the virus can be stopped. However, surely i t needs
time as the production cannot cover the large number of people in a short
t ime. While waiting for the production, people are asked to obey the health
protocol. This can help slow the rapid spread.
(Written by Hedwig Maria)
a . W e n e e d t o c o m p a r e t h e v a c c i n e - m a k i n g p r o c e s s n o w t o t h a to f t h e p r e v i o u s o n e .b . W h a t b e c o m e s t h e m a t t e r i s t h e s h o r t v a c c i n e - m a k i n gp r o c e s s .c . T h e d e v e l o p m e n t o f t h e v a c c i n e s d e p e n d s o n t h e n u m b e r o fp h a s e s t h e y p a s s .d . T h e l o n g t e r m e f f e c t o f v a c c i n e i s u n c e r t a i n .e . W H O d o e s n ’ t d e t e r m i n e w h i c h p l a t f o r m s h o u l d b e u s e d .f . T h e s h o r t a g e o f k n o w l e d g e o n c o r o n a v i r u s c l o s e s t h e c h a n c et o f i n d o u t t h e a n s w e r o n s o m e q u e s t i o n s a b o u t i t .g . T h e i m p r o p e r v a c c i n e d e v e l o p m e n t l e a d s t o p e o p l e ’ s d o u b to n i t s e f f e c t i v e n e s s .
1 . F i n d o u t t h e i s s u e o f t h e t e x t .2 . F i n d o u t t h e f u n c t i o n o f t h e f i r s t p a r a g r a p h .3 . F i n d o u t h o w t h e s e c o n d p a r a g r a p h c o n n e c t s t o t h e f i r s t o n e .4 . C h o o s e t h e a r g u m e n t s b e l o w w h i c h y o u c a n f i n d i n t h e s e c o n dp a r a g r a p h .
5 . F i n d o u t t h e f u n c t i o n o f t h e w o r d “ O n c o n t r a r y ” i n t h e t h i r dp a r a g r a p h .
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A . T h e i n v e n t i o n o f t h e m R N A v a c c i n e sB . T h e t r a n s i e n c e o f m R N A .C . T h e e f f e c t i v e n e s s o f t h e m R N A v a c c i n e s
- m R N A ’ s a b i l i t y t o e n c o d e t h e d i f f e r e n t s e q u e n c e i s h i g h .- T h e s t a n d a r d i z a t i o n i s i m p o r t a n t f o r t h e n e w t e c h n o l o g y .- T h e t e m p o r a r y e x i s t e n c e o f t h e R N A d o e s n ’ t g i v e a n y e f f e c t t ot h e b o d y .- T h e i m m u n e s y s t e m c a n d e t e c t t h e s p i k e p r o t e i n m a d e b y t h ec e l l a s i n s t r u c t e d b y t h e v a c c i n e .- A n t i b o d i e s a n d T c e l l s h a v e i m p o r t a n t r o l e i n t h e i m m u n es y s t e m .
6 . M a t c h e a c h a r g u m e n t i n p a r a g r a p h t h r e e t o i t s e x p l a n a t i o n .T h e a r g u m e n t s :
T h e e x p l a n a t i o n :
7 . F i n d o u t t h e c o n t e n t o f t h e l a s t p a r a g r a p h .8 . F i n d o u t t h e t e x t s t r u c t u r e o f t h i s t e x t .
Activity Two
Having done activity one, share your answers to the class!
Activity Three
Understanding some words can improve your vocabulary. Do
the exercise below!
Fil l in the gap with the proper word in the box!
trigger, genetic, collaborate, efficacy,accelerate, approved, recognize, mechanism,transient, vaccinated, viral, immunity,manufacture, validate, potentially
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Activity Four
Learning from the discussion, now i t ’s t ime to practice
writ ing a discussion text! Here are the steps you should do.
1. Choose the issue in the Before Learning part.
2. From the issue, make an outl ine. Use the generic
structure of the text to ease your making the outl ine.
Remember to have the simple sentences for the main ideas
in the outl ine.
3. Develop the outl ine into an essay of about 500 words.
1. The people in the world have been connected through internet, so i t ’s
easy for them to … to invent new technology.
2. Since the authority has … the use of some vaccines, people cast their
doubt on the vaccine safety.
3. When some food … the allergy on your body, avoid i t not to get i t
worse.
4. Being … means asking the cells to produce antibodies to protect the
body against the virus.
5. There has been technology enabling the doctor to detect the … defect
in the growing fetus.
6. I f T cells can … the viruses well , they will be able to kil l them and we
won ’t get sick.
7. People ’s … can drop to the low level and endanger them when they
are in great stressed.
8. This virus is … the deadliest in the world as unti l now i t has kil led
thousands of people.
9. In spite of the great …, the researchers are asked to review the effect
of the vaccine after injecting i t to people for two months.
10. We should keep the … in our body run well by having regular
exercise.
11. The l iver is the most important organ that … protein.
12. Is i t possible that … attack of the virus causes the severe damage on
the body organs?
13. You had better … your data before you use them to determine the
next process to get the most accurate result .
14. People are worried about getting the … disease which comes from
the deadly virus.
15. To … vaccine development, the researchers are reviewing each
phase in detail .
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Closing
When you have finished writing the essay, presentit to the class, and let the teacher and your friendsevaluate it.
Activity Five
TO REVIEW ALL MATERIALS,
1. Mention the social function of Discussion text.2. Mention the generic structure of a Discussion text.3. Mention the adverbs used to connect the paragraphcontaining pro arguments to the contra one.
References:
COVID 19 Vaccine Deep Dive: Safety, Immunity, RNAProduction, w Shane Crotty, PhD (Pfizer / Moderna) -YouTubehttps://www.cdc.gov/coronavirus/2019-ncov/vaccines/different-vaccines/mrna.htmlhttps://www.chemistryworld.com/news/what-are-the-risks-of-fast-tracking-a-covid-19-vaccine/4012130.articlehttps://www.chemistryworld.com/news/what-are-the-risks-of-fast-tracking-a-covid-19-vaccine/4012130.articleIntisari , November 2020 page 8 - 50Kompas, Kamis 17 Desember 2020Kompas, Jumat 18 Deseber 2020