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CORRECTIONS EXERCISE ONE: INTRODUCE YOURSELF

ENGLISH CLASS ( http://www.palabea.net/class_rooms/3/show)

SPECIAL THANKS TO FRANKIE AND MARC!!

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ORIGINAL MESSAGE ENGLISH CORRECTIONS

Hi,

my name is Roland. Im from Germany. Im

here to improve my language skills and to meet

other people from everywhere on the world.

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Hi Im Pat I live in Italy. I like travelling,

reading and listening to music almost all kind

of music. I would like to improve english and

learn german and spanish and learn more aboutother cultures.

I think its a marvelous idea to have a forum

where to help each other. Im new at Palabea so

I hope to learn quickly how to move.

Hi Im Pat I live in Italy. I like travelling,

reading and listening to music almost all kinds

of music. I would like to improve myEnglish

and learn German and Spanish and (also)learnmore about other cultures.

I think its a marvelous marvellous idea to have

a forum where (to)people can help each other.

Im new at Palabea so I hope to learn quickly

how to move (?).

Hi

My name is hadi.I am from Iran . Im here to

improve my English.

Hi

My name is Hadi. I am from Iran . Im here to

improve my English.

Howdy folk! Im Slava by name and came here

to get a good boost of my language skills. I like

mysticism, psychology, gaming, D&D, politics,

communication to people from all over the

world and many other things). Russia is my

Motherland =)

Howdy folks! Im Slava by name and came here

to (get a good)boost (of) my language skills. I

like mysticism, psychology, gaming, D&D,

politics, communication (to) with people from

all over the world and many other things).

Russia is my Motherland =)

Hi. My names Valentina. I come from Italy. I

would like to improve my Emglish. I study

Languages at universit degli Studi di Lecce. I

like listening to music , watching film in theoriginal language, in particular in english.

Bye

Hi, my name is Valentina. I come from Italy and

I would like to improve my English. I study

languages at universit degli Studi di Lecce. I

like listening to music and watching films in theoriginal language, English films in particular.

Other also: ...... watching films in their original

language, especially English films.

Hi people. My name is Sergi and im here

because i want to imporve my english, and i

think that this web is a good way to do it. Im

26, and i have a lot of hobbies like football,

tenis, running etc. and im a footballs referee.

Now im finishing my studies in the Universidad

de Barcelona. the next year ill be a phyisical

education teacher.

Hi people. My name is Sergi and Im here

because I want to improve my English. I think

this web is a good way to do it. Im 26, and I

have a lot of hobbies like football, tennis,

running etc. and Im a football referee.

Now Im finishing my studies in (at)the

Universidad de Barcelona. the next yearIll be a

physical education teacher.( sports teacher)
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Halo! Apa kabar? :D

my name is amira, im 14 going on 15 years old

and im indonesia. uhapparently im the

youngest huh? lol. im here to uh.. 1st of all i

want to make friends with people across the

globe, 2nd is i want to get to know each

countrys culture and else, and the 3rd is toimprove my english. I love music, piano,

writing, jokes, chats, food, drink, and any other

crazy stuffs. glad to meet you all! :D

Halo!Apa kabar? :D

My name is Amira, Im 14 going on 15 years old

and ImfromIndonesia. uhapparently Im the

youngest huh? lol. Im here to uh.. 1st of all I

want to make friends with people across the

globe, 2nd (is) I want to get to know each

countrys culture and (else ??), and the 3rd is toimprove my English. I love music, piano,

writing, jokes, chats, food, drink, and any other

crazy stuff(s). glad to meet you all! :D

Hi! Im Natalia, Im 18 going on 19 years old

and Im from Poland. I like first of all sport.

Volleyball, football(soccer), swimming,

handball, skijumping;) I like listening to music,

dancing, acting and singing. This year I have

secondary school certificate (in polish it namesmatura) and Im very nervous. Than I would

like to go to Sports Academy;)

Im here, because I want to improve my english

and I would like to know people from all world:)

Hi! Im Natalia, Im 18 going on 19 years old

and Im from Poland. I like first of all sport.

Volleyball, football, swimming, handball,

skijumping;) I like listening to music, dancing,

acting and singing. This year I have secondary

school certificate (in Polish (it names) it iscalledmatura) and Im very nervous. Than I would

like to go to Sports Academy;)

Im here, because I want to improve my English

and I would like to know people from all over

the world:)

My name is Nico, Im from Vigo North-West of

Spain, I think english is a very useful languageand I like it. I would like to listen engliss songs

and to can understand what it means.

I work in the alternative energy field and I enjoy

read about that but many texts are in english.

I like more the technique than the literature but I

woul like to read books in englis and to can

watch movies in english without to have read the

subtitles and lose what its happening in the

scream.

Of course I like to know different people with

their own culture and talk with their.

OPTION 1)

Hi,My name is Nico, Im from Vigo North-West of

Spain, I thinkEnglish is a very useful language

and I like it. I would like to listen engliss songs

in English and to can understand what it means.

(I would like to listen English songs and to be

able to understand them.

I work in the alternative energy field and I enjoy

read about that but many texts are in english. (I

work in alternative energy technologies field. I

enjoy reading about this, but many texts are

written in English))

I like more the technique than the literature but I

woul like to read books in englis and to can

watch movies in english without to have read the

subtitles and lose what its happening in the

scream. (I prefer technology to literature but I

would like to read books in English and be able

to watch movies in English without having to

read the subtitles and lose what is happening on

screen)

Of course I like to know different people withtheir own culture and talk with (their) them.


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Optionb)My name is Nico, I'm from Vigo,

northwest of Spain. I think English is a very

useful language and I like it. I would like to

listen to English songs and understand what they

mean (or understand the lyrics).

I would like to ---> listen to English songs and

understand what they mean (which meanslistening to the song and understanding the

lyrics at the same time, and not having two

separate actions happening one after the other,

which is implied if one writes... to listen to

English songs and to understand...)

I work in the field of alternative technologies. I

enjoy reading about this field but a lot of the

literature is in English . I like to learn more

about the techniques in the field more than the

literature, although I would really like to readEnglish books in general. I also like to watch

English movies without having to read the

subtitles since I lose sight of what is happening

on-screen when I do so.

Of course, I like to get to know people of

different cultures and talk with them

Hello all!

Im Uthman, 27 years old. I come from Libya. Ijoined this class to improve my English and

make new friends, so we can help each other.

My level is high intermediate. I spend most of

my time learning English, so I can say it has

become my hobby!

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Helo, I am Xabier from Basque. I work in a

sailing company and I often use english in my

work. That is the reason why I want learn more

english.

I am interested in sports like soccer (european

football), surf, snowboarding and, of course, insailing.

I am pleased to meet you.

Hello, I am Xabier from Basque. I work in a

sailing company and I often use English in my

work. That is the reason why I want learn more

English.

I am interested in sports like soccer (european

football), surf, snowboarding and, of course, insailing.

I am pleased to meet you.

Hello!

My name is Sveta, 32 years old. I live in

Germany. Im here to improve my English.

English is very important nowadays, I think.

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Hi everybody! Im Cinzia, Im fromNaples,

Italy. I like reading, surfing the web, listening tothe music and, of course, improving my

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English :)

Hi,

My name is Tobias and Im from Germany. Ilike sports, travelling (especially Australia) and

reading. I joined the English class to improve

my English. Im here at palabea to improve my

language skills, maybe learn something about

other cultures and maybe meet some people

from other countries.

cheers Tobias

Hi,

I am Isilda, I come from Portugal and I live in

England with my husband, my son, my daughterand my brother. I am here since 2005. I am

studying English, this year is my last year free

study, today I did my English test level 2. I like

English but I really have difficulty with

pronunciation, and I work hard for change that.

Maybe we together can learn English, and

practice as well. Why we dont create a group,

maybe we can meet on MSN or other way.

Maybe any teacher can give us a hand and create

an interesting learn group. All together can make

a difference.

Hi,

(I am) My name is Isilda, I come from Portugal

and I live in England with my husband, my son,my daughter and my brother. I am here since

2005. I am studying English, this year is my last

year free study, today I did my English test level

2. I like English but I really have difficulty with

pronunciation, and I work hard (for) to change

that.

Maybe we together can learn English, and

practice as well. Why we dont create a group,

maybe we can meet on MSN orsome other way.

Maybe (any) a teacher can give us a hand and

create an interesting learning group. All togethercan make a difference.

Hello from Athens , i am 29 years old and i am

trying to improve my English ,

but with out success , i cant understand how all

these classrooms work .

i am very happy when read Patricia msg.

Hello from Athens , i I am 29 years old and i I

am trying to improve my English ,

but with out success , i Icant (cant) understand

how all these classrooms work .

i I am very happy when I read Patricias msg.

Hi,

I am Dmitry (or Dima, doesnt matter). I live inBelarus and want to improve my English

because its important for me and my job. Im

programmer and every day I need to read

different books, forums, articles and etc in

English. Additionally I need to write letters to

our customers and its so hard for me! I study

English for about 6 or 8 months and now my

English level is elementary. Yeah, not so

good, as I can and I need.

First them all I want to know how we can helps

to each other in our groups? Im novice at

palabela.

p.s. I can consult anyone who wants to learn

Hi,

I am Dmitry (or Dima, it doesnt matter). I livein Belarus and want to improve my English

because its important for me and my job. Im a

computerprogrammer and every day I need to

read different books, forums, articles (and) etc in

English. Additionally I need to write letters to

our customers and its so hard for me! I (study)

have studied English for about 6 or 8 months

and now my English level is elementary.

Yeah, not so good, (as I can and I need) and I

need to improve.

First them all I want to know how we can

help(s) to each other in our groups? Im a novice

at palabela.


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Russian. p.s. I can (consult with anyone)be consulted by

anyone who wants to learn Russian.

Hello.

Im Evgenii. im programmer. Russia is my

Motherland too.

Thats all.

Hello.

Im Evgenii. Im a programmer. Russia is my

Motherland too.Thats all.

Hi,

My name is Adriana, Im 28 years old, I was

born and I live in Brazil, I work and Im doing

postgraduation at Labour Law. I decided to came

to palabea because I studied English just when I

was a child and I was forgetting the vocabulary

and grammar. When I have free time I like to go

to the beach, cinema, have fun with friends, rock

music, internet, tours

Hi,

My name is Adriana, Im 28 years old, I was

born and I live in Brazil (I was born in Brazil

where I live), I work and Im doing

postgraduation at (postgraduate studies in)

Labour Law. I decided to came (come) to

palabea because I studied English just when I

was a child and I was forgetting the vocabulary

and grammar. When I have free time I like to go

to the beach, cinema, have fun with friends, rockmusic, internet, tours

hi, mi name in leyder, i am 21 years old, i live in

Cali (Colombia), i`m student, and i come here to

improve mi english and Pronunciation.

mi hoobies are the movies, the music, friends,

nature, write and read.

hi, mi ( my ) name in leyder, I am 21 years old, I

live in Cali (Colombia), (i`m) Im a student, and

I come here to improve mi my E nglish and

Pronunciation.

(mi hoobies) My hobbies are the movies, the

music, friends, nature, (write and read) writing

and reading .

Hi guys, Im Eugenia from Taiwan but now

having my MA program in Freiburg, Germany.

I love learning languages and reading (especially

those classic literatures). Nice to meet you all

here :)

Hi guys, Im Eugenia from Taiwan but now

having (doing) my MA program in Freiburg,

Germany.

I love learning languages and reading

(especially literary classics) Nice to meet you all

here :)

Hi there!

Im Joanna from Poland. Id like to meet

people from all over the world, and the Palabea

is the best place to do it:)And of course Id like to improve my English.

I hope it will be great fun!

Joanna

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Hello, I am Bai Lu 7984 (I like my nickname), I

am from Ecuador and study the last year of

architecture. I want improve my english, a lot.

Hello, I am Bai Lu 7984 (I like my nickname), I

am from Ecuador and study the last (am

studying the final) year of architecture. I want

improve my English, a lot.

Hello,

My name is Nathalie and I am 23 years old. Ilive on the east coast in Sweden, not to far away

from Stockholm. And I guess that I want to learn

Hello,

My name is Nathalie and I am 23 years old. Ilive on the east coast in (of) Sweden, not too far

away from Stockholm. And I guess that I want
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more about the English language, you are never

fully learned after all.

to learn more about the English language, you

are never fully learned after all. (you have never

learned everything after all)

Hi, there. ^^

My name is Vanessa and I am 18 years old. I

live in the middle of Germany and I like theEnglish language, but my skill in languages is

not good, so I want to improve it. My biggest

problems are the formulation and the

vocabularies. I am sure, that I can talk with

someone in English and that we will understand

each other, but I want to talk a pretty good

English. Well, English is important nowadays,

and it is a beautiful language, so why shall we

not learn and use it correctly?

Yours, Makochou

Hi, there. ^^

My name is Vanessa and I am 18 years old. I

live in the middle of Germany and I like theEnglish language, but my skill in languages is

not good, so I want to improve it. My biggest

problems are the formulation (grammar?) and

the vocabularies. I am sure, that I can talk with

someone in English and that we will understand

each other, but I want to talk(a) pretty good

English. Well, English is important nowadays,

and it is a beautiful language, so why shall we

not learn it and use it correctly?

Yours, Makochou

BSD

Hello everybody,

My name is Nadja. I am a 23-year-old woman

dwelling in Sweden. I am LilyBergs sister. I am

here to improve my English too. I am interested

in religion, history, society, cultures and

languages with more. I am a kind girl so feel

free to message me if you want!

Peace!Nadja

BSD

Hello everybody,

My name is Nadja. I am a 23-year-old woman

dwelling (living) in Sweden. I am LilyBergs

sister. I am here to improve my English too. I am

interested in religion, history, society, cultures

and languages with (and) more. I am a kind girl

so feel free to message me (send me a message)

if you want!Peace!

Nadja

Hi everybody,

Im Elaheh, from Iran.Its been a long time I

havent checked my account here,but now I have

enough time ( but only for 2 weeks) to do

something with my English learning and also

find some good friends. well,Im tired of

learning English by reading about grammer and

I want to improve it by speaking.I really like to travel all over the world.I dont

like to stay in a place for a long time.books and

music are my two eternal friends.I use to watch

movies a lot but since Im busy with my

university activities,Ive no more time for it.Im

a member of a student society at the university

and most of my time is spent with its activities.

God bless you and sorry if I have talked too

much!

Hi everybody,

Im Elaheh, from Iran.Its been a long time I

havent checked my account here, (Its been a

long time since I checked my account here) but

now I have enough time ( but only for 2 weeks)

to do something with my English learning and

also find some good friends. well,Im tired of

learning English by reading about grammer andI want to improve it by speaking.

I really like to travel all over the world.I dont

like to stay in a place for a long time.books and

music are my two eternal friends.I use to watch

movies a lot but since Im busy with my

university activities,Ive no more time for it.Im

a member of a student society at the university

and most of my time is spent with its activities.

(spent on activities there)

God bless you and sorry if I have talked too

much!

wow apparently im still holding the record of wow apparently Im still holding the record of


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the youngest member to introduce herself in this

forum. haha anyway, nice meeting all you guys

here. if you need some help with english you can

contact me or what, i will surely help as much as

i could. :) also if youre interested in learning

indonesia, please contact me. thanks :D

the youngest member to introduce herself in this

forum. haha anyway, nice meeting all you guys

here. if you need some help with English you

can contact me or what, i will surely help as

much as i could (can). :) also if youre interested

in learning indonesian, please contact me. thanks

:D

Hi all ,

Im Dave from Hong Kong. I would like to

improve my English skills in there.By the way, I

hope to meet other people from everywhere.

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Hey all,

my name is Sebastian, Im 17 years old and Im

using this website to improve my English skills

as well. However Id like to meet people from

other countrys and cultures. Futhermore I wouldlike to improve your German / English skills. I

thought about teaching German in England / GB

/ North-America / Austrila / New Zealand. So

Ive youd like to improve your spoken and

written skills in these languages just ask me :)

Hey all,

my name is Sebastian, Im 17 years old and Im

using this website to improve my English skills

as well. However Id like to meet people from

other countrys (countries) and cultures.Futhermore I would like to improve your

German / English skills. I thought about

teaching German in England / GB / North-

America / Australia / New Zealand. So Ive (if)

youd like to improve your spoken and written

skills in these languages just ask me :)

Hello

Im Paty and I live in Valencia (Spain). Im very

happy to meet you all! I like reading,watch films

and fine arts.

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Hi to everybody! My name is Marc and Im a

student of Patricia in her Spanish class. Im from

Manila, Philippines and although I am Filipino, I

consider myself a native English speaker.

Actually, most Filipinos are bilingual and in our

house, we spoke both English and Filipino

(Tagalog) when we were growing up.

Anyway, if you need help with your English

skills, do let me know and I will see what I cando.

Im also practicing my Spanish so to the Spanish

speakers out there learning English, do write me

if you are willing to correspond with me and

correct my Spanish. Im also looking for people

I can talk to in Spanish, maybe via Skype, to

practice my listening and speaking skills.

Actually, I love to learn about foreign cultures

and foreign languages, and I would love very

much to travel all over the world. Its a very

expensive proposition though, so hearing aboutyour home and culture would be the next best

thing. Ive studied a bit of Italian, Romanian,

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and German but not enough to keep a

correspondence though.

I love food and drinks, be it Indian food

(chicken massala with chapati bread etc), Italian

food (spaghetti and pizza, of course!), Spanish

food (my wife cooks excellent paella, plus I love

her ropa vieja old clothes, what a funny namefor a soup-goulash!... etc), German sausages and

beer (nurnberger sausages, die Brezn und

Erdinger bier, naturlich!), Russian vodka

(although I cant drink too much of it, too

strong!), Australian wine (or most new world

wines), Iranian kebab and dishes, Greek gyros

and mediterranean food (olive oil and stuff), etc.

The list is endless

I also love rock music, and I play the electric

guitar, mostly rock instrumentals nowadays

(Steve Vai, Joe Satriani, etc)... If you want toexchange notes with me, Id love to hear from

you.

Ok, please feel free to write me and I hope I can

be of help to you as well :)

Regards!

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