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PENTAKSIRAN BERASASKAN SEKOLAH BAHASA INGGERIS Teachers Copy PERNYATAAN STANDARD LEMBAGA PEPERIKSAAN MALAYSIA Learning Outcomes Band Performance Standard 2.3 Present information to different audiences by writing a recount 5 B5 Demonstrate the ability to use language in a variety of situations using largely appropriate language conventions. Descriptor Evidence B5DT1 Writing a narrative B5DT1E1 Able to write an account of an incident / event using correct grammar and mechanics of writing with guidance

Exercise with answer: You went on a camping trip with your classmates during the weekend. Using the notes and pictures below, write an account of what you did during the trip.

When writing your story: you may use all the notes given elaborate on the given notes to make it interesting add any other relevant information make sure it is not less than 120 words

Answer: Last weekend, five of my classmates and I went to a camping trip at Tengkek Waterfall. We were accompanied by Mr Zali, our dearest class teacher. We had planned this trip for a month. Along the way, we saw beautiful scenery of nature. We also could see a bunch of monkeys climbing the trees. We arrived at the campsite after 2 hours journey by bus. Mr Zali chose a clear space to build up the tent. At first, it was a bit difficult for us to build the tent but with Mr Zalis guidance, we managed to put up all 3 tents. Meanwhile, John and Rizal went to look for some fire wood. We needed them to start a fire. The fire is useful for cooking and avoiding mosquitoes and wild animals. Then, Wong and I were making food cupboard from the rest of the woods that we have collected. We actually have learnt to make food cupboard in surviving skills or better known as Kemahiran Hidup in school. So, it was quite helpful now in camping. In the afternoon, we went for jungle trekking. There were so many beautiful flora and fauna. It was a breathtaking sight. We also had to climb the hill in order to reach Tengkek waterfall. We took a lot of photos as the view was so astonishing. From where we were standing, we could hear the gushing of water. So we knew that we were so close to the waterfall. We quickly rushed over. We could not resist ourselves by the time we saw the sparkling river. All of us except Mr Zali and Rizal dived into the pool. We screamed out loud as the water was as cold as ice. Mr Zali and Rizal laughed at us. While we were swimming, Mr Zali set up the picnic mat by the waterfall. We were having so much fun in the water. In the evening, we returned to our camp area, exhausted but happy. The next day we went fishing. I had brought 3 fishing rods from home. The water was so calm. The air was cool and refreshing. After about 2 hours we finally managed to catch about 5 medium size fishes and some small fishes. Hafiz, who is the best cook among us grilled the fishes outdoors. It was so yummy and delicious. On the last day we took down the tent and cleared up the rubbish at the camping area. It was time to go home. We were so upset to leave the place as it was enjoyable and thrilling trip. It was an unforgettable experience as we had the opportunity to view and explore the nature at close range.

PENTAKSIRAN BERASASKAN SEKOLAH BAHASA INGGERIS Students Copy NAME CLASS DATE EVIDENCE EXERCISE You went on a camping trip with your classmates during the weekend. Using the notes and pictures below, describe what you did during the trip. : : : : B5DT1E1

When writing your story: you may use all the notes given elaborate on the given notes to make it interesting add any other relevant information make sure it is not less than 120 words